Joan
Didion's opening paragraphs describe her knowledge of the Santa Ana
winds of California. Joan's view on the Santa Ana winds seems to be
negative and informative, even though she states that this occurrence
usually seems to create certain disturbances in the world. She conveys
this view using a fair amount of good diction, structure and selection
of detail.
Most
of the words that Joan uses to describe what a Santa Ana is, and what it
does, are seen to have been carefully selected by her. She uses words
that aren't normally seen or read by the public, as well as a translation
to another language. "The baby frets. The maid sulks." Her writing sounds
well composed, at this point, and further throughout the paragraph it
seems that Joan's looking negatively on the matter of a Santa Ana. She uses
the word "foehn", which means strong wind. She writes of fights, suicide,
nervousness, depression and more words with negative connotations that,
again, are showing a negative perspective. This is even more clearly seen
in the last few sentences; one in particular showing the change in the
ratio of positive to negative ions becoming "unusually high". Joan ends her
introductory paragraphs with, "in the simplest terms, is make people
unhappy which is what the high ratio of positive to negative ions means." With
this being said, you could only assume that the Santa Ana winds are not
appreciated or looked on happily and positively by the writer.
Joan's
structure of her paragraphs also helps with conveying her negative view
on a Santa Ana. Right off the bat, she writes of an "uneasy" tension
that is
physically felt by the people, as a whole, of Los Angeles. She says that
it is "impossible" for a Santa Ana to be predicted, but that is
not true in terms of what can be felt by the inhabitants of the
complicated city
of Los Angeles. The next paragraph continues as an anecdote Joan shares
of her first knowledge of a Santa Ana, when she had first moved to the
City of Angels. The bad effects of the winds were told to her by
neighbors, and she then had experienced them for herself. She follows
this paragraph, and ends with, one on all of the terrible aftermaths of a
Santa Ana and a foehn, with the main effect being, simply put,
happiness. As Joan
writes of the bad effects of a Santa Ana, with proceeding to worse and
ending with the worst effects, showing that these winds are
something that she doesn't view as pleasant and, therefore, negatively.
The essay begins with the thesis statement that answers the the question. The paragraphs delve into the topics well. Additional information wouldn't hurt.
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